Good morning Gorillas

i) What is this story about ?
This story is about the magic tree house took Jack and Annie to the mountians of Afica when they were at the Rain
Forest when they were there they met a little gorilla when Annie saw the gorilla she name it Bu Bu because it keep
saying bu bu when they following Bu Bu they met a family of gorillas.

When they saw the gorillas Jack quickly take out the Rain Forest book from his bag pack the book the book said that gorillas are shy and gentle giant when they were reading the book when the silver back gorilla woke up all the other gorillas woke up and they started to go to anther place and they started to find some food.

Jack and Annie follow the group of gorillas. When they were there they started to pick some fruit, Bu Bu mum gave Jack a few berries from the bush then Ho Ho mum gave Jack a branch to eat, but Jack said he will eat it later. When they have to go they show the gorillas a love sign then they said goodbye.

ii) What do you like about this story?
I like the story because it is exciting and i do not no that gorillas eat so many diffrent type of things.

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This is the first story review written by Ryan . Good effort. Areas to improve on :
i) Super-long sentence. Need to improve.