This story is about the magic tree house to them to the beach and slove a riddle when they found a mini sub then they took a ride in it.When they were in thge mini sub they took a quick ride in the sub and found two dolphfins and many fishes.Sunddelly a octopus when to grab the mini sub then the octopus shoot black ink because there was one hammer head shark.Then the mini sub has some cracks and water keep going into the mini sub so they have to swimming.When they were swimming they saw the hammerhead shark and they swam faster so they can escape from the hammerhaed shark.sunddenlley the dophfins came and save them to shore then Annie step on something then Annie found a oystar then Jack
and Annie saidtogether the answert to the riddle they said oysatr.
Friday, August 21, 2009
Tonight on the titanic
1) What is this story about ?
The story is about Jack and Annie has to save a dog and free it from a spell they need four things.When they found the book they need to wish to go there.When the magic tree house whisks them to a titanic.The titanic is called a unsinkable ship so many people though the ship is unsinkable.when the
ship started to sink the third class people did not have a chance to escape because they do not know
where to go so they can not escape.So Jack and Annie want to the third class level so they can tell them.When Jack and Annie were there the water was arlady there.Then a boy and a girl came out of their
room then when the ship nearly fell in the sea the girl gave annie one of the thing they need.Then Jack and Annie when to the tree house they wish to go back to Pennsylvania.
2) What do you like / learn about the story?I like this book because I did not know a titanic can be very long.
The story is about Jack and Annie has to save a dog and free it from a spell they need four things.When they found the book they need to wish to go there.When the magic tree house whisks them to a titanic.The titanic is called a unsinkable ship so many people though the ship is unsinkable.when the
ship started to sink the third class people did not have a chance to escape because they do not know
where to go so they can not escape.So Jack and Annie want to the third class level so they can tell them.When Jack and Annie were there the water was arlady there.Then a boy and a girl came out of their
room then when the ship nearly fell in the sea the girl gave annie one of the thing they need.Then Jack and Annie when to the tree house they wish to go back to Pennsylvania.
2) What do you like / learn about the story?I like this book because I did not know a titanic can be very long.
Saturday, August 15, 2009
Good morning Gorillas
i) What is this story about ?
This story is about the magic tree house took Jack and Annie to the mountians of Afica when they were at the Rain
Forest when they were there they met a little gorilla when Annie saw the gorilla she name it Bu Bu because it keep
saying bu bu when they following Bu Bu they met a family of gorillas.
When they saw the gorillas Jack quickly take out the Rain Forest book from his bag pack the book the book said that gorillas are shy and gentle giant when they were reading the book when the silver back gorilla woke up all the other gorillas woke up and they started to go to anther place and they started to find some food.
Jack and Annie follow the group of gorillas. When they were there they started to pick some fruit, Bu Bu mum gave Jack a few berries from the bush then Ho Ho mum gave Jack a branch to eat, but Jack said he will eat it later. When they have to go they show the gorillas a love sign then they said goodbye.
ii) What do you like about this story?
I like the story because it is exciting and i do not no that gorillas eat so many diffrent type of things.
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This is the first story review written by Ryan . Good effort. Areas to improve on :
i) Super-long sentence. Need to improve.
This story is about the magic tree house took Jack and Annie to the mountians of Afica when they were at the Rain
Forest when they were there they met a little gorilla when Annie saw the gorilla she name it Bu Bu because it keep
saying bu bu when they following Bu Bu they met a family of gorillas.
When they saw the gorillas Jack quickly take out the Rain Forest book from his bag pack the book the book said that gorillas are shy and gentle giant when they were reading the book when the silver back gorilla woke up all the other gorillas woke up and they started to go to anther place and they started to find some food.
Jack and Annie follow the group of gorillas. When they were there they started to pick some fruit, Bu Bu mum gave Jack a few berries from the bush then Ho Ho mum gave Jack a branch to eat, but Jack said he will eat it later. When they have to go they show the gorillas a love sign then they said goodbye.
ii) What do you like about this story?
I like the story because it is exciting and i do not no that gorillas eat so many diffrent type of things.
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This is the first story review written by Ryan . Good effort. Areas to improve on :
i) Super-long sentence. Need to improve.
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