Good morning Gorillas

i) What is this story about ?
This story is about the magic tree house took Jack and Annie to the mountians of Afica when they were at the Rain
Forest when they were there they met a little gorilla when Annie saw the gorilla she name it Bu Bu because it keep
saying bu bu when they following Bu Bu they met a family of gorillas.

When they saw the gorillas Jack quickly take out the Rain Forest book from his bag pack the book the book said that gorillas are shy and gentle giant when they were reading the book when the silver back gorilla woke up all the other gorillas woke up and they started to go to anther place and they started to find some food.

Jack and Annie follow the group of gorillas. When they were there they started to pick some fruit, Bu Bu mum gave Jack a few berries from the bush then Ho Ho mum gave Jack a branch to eat, but Jack said he will eat it later. When they have to go they show the gorillas a love sign then they said goodbye.

ii) What do you like about this story?
I like the story because it is exciting and i do not no that gorillas eat so many diffrent type of things.

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This is the first story review written by Ryan . Good effort. Areas to improve on :
i) Super-long sentence. Need to improve.

the tortoise and the dare - Terry deary

about a girl, ellie who is furious whose brother crypsellis use her as a bet against big bacchiard in a foot race.

Bachhiard cheated. He try to hit crypsellis.

Bachhiard thought he was the winner, but the master say that bachhiard cheated.

zac power : Mindgames

What is the story about ?
The story is about a person called Jimmy Shady who wants to read everybody's mind and take over the world. He wants to read every dumb students mind . So Zac was sent to bladesuilee to complete his mission, to capture Jimmy Shady.

Jimmy shady want to login to GIB;s ultra-powerful satellite, WorldEye. Zac got to stop him, but when he reached Bladesuille, he was a bit scared, because he dont know who the hackers are and he is new. So he check the place out.

he remembered his brothe leong give him a gadget. The gadet help him by making a shadow . the shadow look like Zac singing. When he was using the gadget, suddenly the machine keeps saying out the same words.

In the end, he uses a stingbomb which have 3 types of things. first is a 10000dog fart. 2nd is rotten eggs. 3rd is dad's socks. When talking to Jimmy shady, he throw the stingbomb and the mode is 10000 dog fart . he uses his recorder to record what Jimmy shady says. He played what jimmy shady said, which is "that he wants to ready all the children's dumb minds". All the children were very angry and came looking for jimmy shady. Then all look for jimmy shady. ZAC called the police and Jimmy shady was caught.

Astrosaurs - Riddle of the Raptors

1) This is the first story

ii) This is when Tegg finally has his dream come true. He becomes Astrosaurs captain in charge of a ship. Then Admiral Roosa bring him to the ship, and prepared a team for him.

iii) There, he met Arx, Iggy and Grispy.

iv) Admiral Roosa tells all the Astrosaur Captain the Olympic is coming soon. He said that the best team to drive that will be a at the second mission.

v) Tegg's team take off to olympics. They saw a huge explosion. Tegg say it was not fair as this was the first time he drives a ship.

vi) They met general Loki. Then he ask the astrosaurs team to earn $10000. Teg says it will take years to earn that type of money. Gen loki counter-propose $700.

vii) Agree to meet the next day's midngiht at planet 16.

viii) Soon, tegg and his team manage to earn $700 and meet at planet 16. THere they found the raptors with hungry eyes.

ix) When they meet the T-Rex, Tegg makes loud noise to make the T-rex very angry. So the T-Rex went mad. Then Grispy ask, them to take off without Teg. Then Iggy say no.

x) Then they reach the olympics. THere they meet Hanks.

Astrosaurs - Revenge of the Fangs

1) When Attila escapes, he went to space and he pretend to team up with the mammoth & Aulbu .

ii) Teggs (good guy) met his friends, Dutch and Blink at the Astrosaurs Academy. They were kidnapped by the mammoth, Attila & Aulbu.

iii) Dutch and Blink manage to escape . Dutch uses his strength to break the chain.

iv) After escaping, they went to fight with the villians, Attila and his dyna-dyroids ie Mammoth, Aulbu & Bata.

v) The mammoth clash to Arx, Iggy and Girspy ship.

vi) Then Damona(another cadet) found Tegg and also found the evil villian's handphone.

vii) Then Tegg and dutch and Blink realise that Bata , Abuth and the mammoth were just dyna-dyroids. Attila went hiding and he ask his dyan-dyroid to destroy Tegg, Dutch and Blink.

viii) Finally the dyna-dyroids died. Arx use the mega-spray-y.

Astrosaurs - Day of Dino-droids

i) Attila create the dino-dryoids

ii) Attila kidnap the Astrosaurs team

iii) Astrosaurs manage to escape

iv) Attila & his evil dino-dyroid goes to the plant eating sector .

v) Attila ask his evil dino-dryoid to fight his astrosaurs.

vi) The astraosaursfinally killed the evil din-dyroids. Attila was put in prison, but managed to escape.

Ryan - living room monitor

Ryan

i) Duty to make sure living room is clean and tidy.

ii) if his brother mess it up, he can get his brother to clean up.